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Big scar

Post by Stevenloan » Tue Jan 12, 2021 5:33 pm

Hi everybody! I have a new colleague. We've known each other for a few weeks. We usually talk to each other on our lunchbreak. I notice he has a big scar on his left arm. Do the following sentences sound natural in this context?

1. Why do you have that big scar? If I may ask.
2. Do you mind me asking why you got the big scar?
3. If I may ask, what is the story behind that big scar?

Your answers will be greatly appreciated.

StevenLoan
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Re: Big scar

Post by Erik_Kowal » Wed Jan 13, 2021 6:14 pm

To my mind, the central issue here is not linguistic so much as the need to tread cautiously and with sensitivity. I say this because you've described it as a big scar. This implies that the circumstances that gave rise to it were probably traumatic, whether through accident, self-harm or attack by a third party. For that reason your colleague would most likely not want to be reminded of them.

If it was me, I would try to restrain my curiosity and either wait for my colleague to spontaneously say something about it, or subtly steer the topic of conversation to a related area, like an accident I once had in childhood, in the hope that this might prompt him to explain why he had the scar.

If he did not volunteer that information in either scenario, I would conclude that he did not want to talk about it. I would not then press the issue: it would presumably not be essential for me to satisfy my curiosity, and might well be painful for my colleague.

Being unwillingly obliged to respond to a direct question might therefore have a generally negative effect on my colleague's attitude or feelings towards me.

Anyway, that is the context which all of your prospective formulations ought, in my view, to take into account.
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Re: Big scar

Post by Stevenloan » Thu Jan 14, 2021 4:00 pm

Erik : Thanks a lot for your opinion. It is really useful. Have a good day.

StevenLoan
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