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Post by azz » Mon Jun 10, 2019 9:52 am

a. In the room danced two youngsters.
b, In the room were dancing two youngsters.

c. In the distance moved a cloud of dust.
d. In the distance was moving a cloud of dust.

e. With the basketball played a group of young people.
f. With the basketball were playing a group of young people.


Are the above sentences grammatically correct?


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Post by Phil White » Mon Jun 10, 2019 4:20 pm

None of them follow the standard conventions of syntax. In very rare circumstances, a and b and e and f may conceivably be used as rhetorical devices, but the scenario must have been prepared beforehand (i.e. such sentences could only follow a focus on the room/basketball. I cannot conceive of any circumstance in which c or d may be used.
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Post by tony h » Tue Jun 11, 2019 4:58 pm

OK Phil, I'll give it a try. They remind me of books I used to read when I was a boy.

c. In the distance moved a cloud of dust.

The small band of khaki clad men had reached the edge of the village. They looked out over the flat plain of the dessert which they would have to cross. "Look", said Algy pointing north. In the distance moved a cloud of dust. George got out the binoculars. "Jerry half-tracks. It looks like they're heading for Al Wadi."

d. In the distance was moving a cloud of dust.

Mr. Somerton was sitting on the veranda looking out over the fields. It looked like a good harvest was in store. A good harvest meant there would be money to invest in the water system. As the sun descended towards the horizon the sky started to look red. In the distance was moving a cloud of dust. It always happened as the cold evening air hit the hot earth forming mini tornedos pulling little particles into the sky. In a moment Mr. Somerton's chair had crashed over. The cloud had changed direction. This wasn't dust, it was locusts. His crop would be gone in a matter of hours.
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Post by Phil White » Tue Jun 11, 2019 9:51 pm

Still doesn't really work for me, Tony. The fronting of the locative expression, combined with the inversion, put massive emphasis on the fronted noun.
In sentences a and b, the utterance is "about" the room. That's what the fronting and inversion do. likewise, in sentences e and f, the utterance is "about" the basketball.

In the case of sentences c and d, this would mean that the sentence is "about" the distance. It's not. it's "about" the cloud of dust.

It's all about the focus, and putting the focus on "distance" simply does not work for me.
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Re: inversion

Post by azz » Fri Jun 14, 2019 8:37 pm

Thank you both so much.

How about
1. In the hallway stood a guard.
2. In the hallway a guard stood.

3. In the hallway sat a guard on a stool.
4. In the hallway a guard sat on a stool.

?

My feeling is that (1) and (4) work and the other two don't... However I think this one is fine

5. In the room two youngsters danced.



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Post by Phil White » Sat Jun 15, 2019 12:23 am

Your feeling is correct. Your sentence 5 is, of course, absolutely normal, but if you front the locative phrase like that, it would be normal to place a comma between it and the subject. Indeed, if you front any phrase or clause before an uninverted statement, it would be normal to place a comma, as in this sentence, where a comma is inserted between the "if" clause and the subject..

A couple of initial thoughts:

1. It seems that the inversion can only be used with intransitive verbs.
"*In the hallway played the guard cards."
"*In the room danced a couple a waltz."

2. As far as I can see, inversion can only be used if the intransitive verb is also unqualified in any way:
"*In the church sang a choir beautifully."
"*In the church sang beautifully a choir."
"In the church sang a choir."
"*In the hallway sat a guard on a chair."

3. It does, however, appear that further information that qualifies the subject and not the verb may be added:
"In the hallway sat a guard playing cards."

The fact, however, remains that inversion of this kind is a relatively rare rhetorical device. It has the effect of shifting the focus of the sentence, in this case rather like zooming in with a camera.

At present, I can't offer any clear guidelines as to where inversion is possible and where not. I am relying on intuition.

Why, for instance, can I not say "In the garden smoked a man"? It meets my requirements 1 and 2 above, but is, to my ear, simply wrong. I have no idea why.

It does seem that it is more readily available with verbs that indicate position or movement:
"Along the road walked a man."
"On the hill stood a castle."
"Into the bedroom rushed Major Sharpe, feverishly fumbling with his trouser buttons."
"At the crossroads waited my friend."
But not "*At the crossroads stopped my friend."

The hypothesis that inversion is more acceptable for verbs of motion is borne out by the following:
"In front of the troops stood a piper."
"In front of the troops marched a piper."
"*In front of the troops played a piper."

(And yes, I have been watching too many episodes of Sharpe recently...)
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Re: inversion

Post by azz » Sat Jun 15, 2019 3:36 am

Thank you so much for another amazing reply1

This is very hard to get a grip on. I'd like to test a few other sentences, and then I'll quit. I think we have two problems. First: where can one use inversion? Second: when does one have to use inversion?

A. In front of the troops, a piper marched.


B. Along the road, a man walked.
C. Along the road, a man ran.


D. Along the road ran a man.


E. In the garden, a man walked.
F. In the garden walked a man.



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Post by tony h » Sat Jun 15, 2019 5:53 pm

Phil White wrote:
Tue Jun 11, 2019 9:51 pm
Still doesn't really work for me, Tony. The fronting of the locative expression, combined with the inversion, put massive emphasis on the fronted noun.
...
In the case of sentences c and d, this would mean that the sentence is "about" the distance. It's not. it's "about" the cloud of dust.

It's all about the focus, and putting the focus on "distance" simply does not work for me.
I find your mood on this interesting. For me, in my examples, "in the distance" is the primary point. It places whatever comes next in a non -immediate-risk-area. It sets the scene. Surely it is the same as "in a land far, far away a old woman was preparing her evening meal". It strikes me that that slides you into the story far more smoothly than "an old woman was preparing her evening meal in a land far, far away".


Similarly :

"I turned a corner and saw a lion prowling in the distance" This form creates fear which is then dissipated.

vs

"I turned the corner and saw in the distance a lion prowling" This form creates interest and wonder.
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Re: inversion

Post by Phil White » Sat Jun 15, 2019 8:41 pm

Tony, your point in the above post is about the fronting of the adverbial "in the distance", with which I take no issue. Your points are all valid. What I dislike is the inversion of the subject and verb in azz's original sentences ("moved a cloud").

A far, far longer post on which I have been working for about 3 or 4 hours, will follow later. I shall explicitly look at the cloud of dust again.
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Re: inversion

Post by Phil White » Sat Jun 15, 2019 10:42 pm

azz wrote:
Sat Jun 15, 2019 3:36 am
This is very hard to get a grip on. I'd like to test a few other sentences, and then I'll quit. I think we have two problems. First: where can one use inversion? Second: when does one have to use inversion?
azz, your second question is easy to answer: Never ... except when it is mandatory.
Your first is largely answered in my previous post, but the answer in that post is not entirely satisfactory, or indeed complete.

I can't find any detailed analyses of the precise syntactical scenario you are asking about, so I shall do my best without the help of other sources.

It is important to understand exactly what is going on here.

Firstly, we need to distinguish between "fronting" and "inversion". In English, normal word order is Subject - Verb - Object - Adverbials. If you do not depart from this, you will rarely, if ever, be wrong, although your language will be a little dull and uninteresting.

So we have the structure "the kids played football in the park every evening."

It is possible to move the adverbial expressions (usually only one) to the front of the sentence for emphasis:
"Every evening the kids played football in the park."

The effect of this "fronting" is to place the focus of the sentence on the fronted element, i.e. the time of day in this example. It would be possible, but unusual, to front "in the park" instead:

"In the park, the kids played football every evening."

This places the focus on the park. We are talking about what happens in the park, and not what the kids did. It is an unusual emphasis to have, but if that is the emphasis, the fronting is correct.

But note that the subject - verb - object word order remains unchanged.

Note also that we can never (except in poetry) front the object of the sentence:
"*Football played the kids in the park every evening."

We can only front the adverbials.

Adverbial expressions fall into five categories, although we generally only think of the first three of these: Adverbials of time, manner, place, degree and frequency.

Any adverbial can be fronted in English:
  • In the tent, Wellington explained the situation to Major Sharpe.
  • In 1803, Sharpe was a sergeant in India.
  • With the last of his strength, Major Sharpe killed the remaining thirteen Dragoons.
  • Every time he met a woman, Major Sharpe had difficulty keeping his trousers on.
  • Greatly, Major Sharpe wished that he could remember where his trousers were.
So far, so good: We can always front adverbials.

In some cases, we can also invert the subject and the verb after an adverbial has been fronted:
"Into the fray rushed Major Sharpe, his weapon unsheathed."

The question is, when can we use this inversion and is it mandatory or common?
Before I attempt to answer that and immediately qualify my answer with an exception, I shall add another element to the mix. English sometimes provides the option of using "dummy subjects" in a number of situations:
  • It is raining.
  • There was a guard in the hallway.
In sentences of the type we are discussing, it is sometimes possible to use a dummy subject. In the examples below, I will often give the non-inverted form, the inverted form and the form with the dummy subject "there" and mark those which are not possible [*] or which are, in my opinion, dubious [?].

Okay, off we go!

Neither inversion nor the dummy subject are possible for transitive or ditransitive verbs:
  • In the clearing, Major Sharpe found a dead Frenchman.
  • *In the clearing found Major Sharpe a dead Frenchman.
  • *In the clearing, there found Major Sharpe a dead Frenchman.
  • That afternoon, Major Ross gave Major Sharpe a letter.
  • *That afternoon gave Major Ross Major Sharpe a letter.
  • *That afternoon there gave Major Ross Major Sharpe a letter.
The list could be extended endlessly, but I have been unable to find any examples of transitive or ditransitive verbs being used with inversion in such scenarios.

So what about intransitive verbs?

Intransitive verbs allow inversion only when the adverbial that is fronted is an adverbial of place (one exception to this is described below):
  • In the hallway stood Major Sharpe. (Place)
  • *At five o'clock rose Major Sharpe. (Time)
  • *With great urgency ran Major Sharpe to the bedroom. (Manner)
Again, there are endless examples, but I can think of only one exception to this rule (see below).

Furthermore, even when the fronted element is an adverbial of place and the verb is intransitive, there appear to be restrictions:
  • In the courtyard stood Sergeant Harper.
  • *In the courtyard smoked Sergeant Harper.
  • Over the fort flew the banner of the French Imperial Guard.
  • In the tent slept Major Sharpe.
  • *In the tent coughed Major Sharpe.
  • Along the track rode Major Sharpe.
  • On the battlefield stood two thousand men.
  • ?On the battlefield waited two thousand men.
  • *On the battlefield fought two thousand men.
  • *On the battlefield died two thousand men.
Some people may argue that the last two of these examples are (just) acceptable, but they sound impossible to my ears.

So what determines whether inversion is possible or not in these examples? This is not easy and leaves considerable latitude for subjectivity. It seems to me that in all the cases where inversion is possible, the verb must inherently suggest a location or some kind of movement. In other words, if you use a word like "stand" or "sleep", it implies motionlessness. And if you use words like "ride" or "walk", they imply motion. They therefore have a direct semantic affinity to the fronted adverbial. If I say "The flag flew", with no further context, it begs the question "where?". If I say "Major Sharpe coughed", it begs no such question. If I say "Major Sharpe rode", without any other context, it begs the question "where" or "where to?". "Sleep" implies a state of motionlessness (but does not beg the question "where?"). "Smoke" does not imply movement or location, neither does it beg the question "where".

Of course, all events happen at a location, but the important thing is the extent to which the location is important to our understanding of the event (the verb). Exactly where the line is drawn will lie in the judgement of the speaker. In stylized writing, and in poetry in particular, this boundary can be stretched. This is the case with your original "in the room danced two youngsters"; and I could imagine a novelist using "in the courtyard smoked Sergeant Harper" to achieve an effect of "painting a scenario". Indeed, it seems to me that the inversion technique is used for precisely this purpose: to "freeze" a narrative in order to paint a backdrop to further narrative.

So, we have 3 principles by which we can determine with some confidence whether or not inversion can be used in such constructions:
  1. The fronted adverbial must be an adverbial of place. (But see exception below.)
  2. The verb must be intransitive.
  3. The verb must in some way imply or demand a location or describe motionlessness or motion.


Before I look at the issue of whether inversion is mandatory, I shall tackle a couple of outstanding issues.

I have been tantalizing you with the threat of an exception. I suggested above that inversion can only be used when the fronted adverbial is an adverbial of manner. I can think of one and only one exception to this, namely the figurative use of "come" with an adverbial of time:
  • In Autumn come the winds.
  • In 1815 came the battle of Waterloo - and Sharpe came too.
  • At five o'clock came the eagerly anticipated news.
  • *At five o'clock came the train.
    This is not possible, because "came" is being used literally.
I can think of no other exceptions to my second principle outside of the realm of poetry or highly stylized writing.

The second issue to be cleared up concerns the use of the dummy subject "there" in such constructions:
At present, it seems to me that the usage is subject to the same constraints as inversion, but with the additional constraint that the real subject must not be a proper noun.
  • Along the track rode a company of Dragoons.
  • Along the track, there rode the company of Dragoons he had seen earlier.
  • Along the track rode Major Sharpe.
  • *Along the track, there rode Major Sharpe.
Otherwise, as I say, the constraints are the same as for the use of inversion.

The third issue that needs clearing up concerns the use of the verb "be".

Take the sentence "the house was on the hill". Some may want to call this an "existential" use of "be", with the meaning that something exists at a particular location. I prefer to see it as a copular usage, the same as "the house is large" or "the house is white". Indeed, we can say "the house was large, white and on the hill".

In this sentence, the "on the hill" can be fronted:
"On the hill was the house." In this case, the inversion is mandatory:
"*On the hill, the house was."

This example would appear to fit into the same schema as the others we have been looking at, but that is not so. Because the verb "be" is copular, "on the hill" is not adverbial, but adjectival. This explains why inversion is mandatory with "be", but not with any other verb that we are looking at. The syntax is simply different.

So is inversion ever mandatory other than in the exception above? Let me put it this way: Fronting is never mandatory, so this inversion is, in that sense, never mandatory. Also, there are often other options available which would be preferred in modern English.

But let's look at some examples:
  1. Along the track rode Major Sharpe.
    Excellent in a narrative context.
  2. Along the track, Major Sharpe rode.
    In its naked form, this sounds strange. But narrative sentences are rarely as simple as the examples we are playing with here. In the context of a longer sentence, this works fine: "Along the track, Major Sharpe rode, worried that he might have contracted the pox.". The inverted version also works fine in such a context: "Along the track rode Major Sharpe, worried that he might have contracted the pox."
  3. Above the fort flew the banner of Castille.
  4. Above the fort, the banner of Castille flew.
    This is fine, and not as ungainly when naked as "Along the track, Major Sharpe rode.".
  5. In the hallway stood the guard.
  6. ?In the hallway, the guard stood.
    This is very peculiar in the naked form shown here, but again, it is fine in "In the hallway, the guard stood, smoking a cigarette."
So is the inversion mandatory when all three principles I listed are met? Sentences 2, 4 and 6 above are certainly ungainly when standing on their own, but in a more normal extended syntactical context, they are fine. I would say that the inverted form is preferable when the construction has no further adornment, but it is not mandatory, and certainly not when the sentence is elaborated.

Of course, despite all that I have said, there will be cases where writers use fronting and inversion in ways that do not follow the principles I have hypothesized above. And often they will work well. But they will be conscious departures from what seems to me to be normal practice.

I said to Tony that I would revisit "in the distance". In fact, I shall revisit all of azz's original sentences, as I was perhaps over-hasty in my response.
  1. In the room danced two youngsters.
  2. In the room were dancing two youngsters.
  3. In the distance moved a cloud of dust.
  4. In the distance was moving a cloud of dust.
  5. With the basketball played a group of young people.
  6. With the basketball were playing a group of young people.
I shall ignore sentences b, d and f, as the use of the past progressive in preference to the simple past is of no significance. If the narrative demands the progressive (which it often will), the progressive is just fine, and all of my above comments remain valid for the progressive forms.

Sentence a meets criterion 1, as the fronted adverbial is an adverbial of place. It meets criterion 2 because the verb "dance" is intransitive. For me, it is absolutely marginal in respect of criterion 3. While the verb "dance" does imply movement, "in the room" implies a static location, so the verb and the adverbial do not "match" completely. But I stand by my original assessment that the sentence is possible if well prepared for.

Sentence c in fact has the same analysis: It meets criteria 1 and 2 and is marginal on criterion 3 on the same grounds. "Moves" implies motion, but the adverbial does not. I still do not like it, but I have to say that it is acceptable. For some reason, it seems to work better with the dummy subject: "In the distance, there moved a cloud of dust".

Sentence e. Hmmmmm, sentence e. I do not know what I was thinking when I said that this was conceivable. Often, when confronted with one of azz's sentences, I will spend many minutes, hours or even days thinking "before I say that this is ungrammatical, can it be made to work?", and I, like Tony, construct scenarios in which the sentence can be forced to work. Clearly, I did that with this sentence. Ah yes! It comes back to me! I had imagined somebody relating a dream sequence about a basketball... Such scenarios are obscure, and even then, I doubt that one in a million would choose even to front the adverbial, let alone to attempt to invert the subject and verb. So again, I revise my opinion somewhat. Sentences e and f are highly unlikely.

Like Major Sharpe, the battle over, I would like to turn to more enjoyable things. But unlike Major Sharpe, I am too bloody exhausted...
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Re: inversion

Post by Erik_Kowal » Sun Jun 16, 2019 7:01 am

Thanks, Phil. That explanation is a tour de force.
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Re: inversion

Post by azz » Mon Jun 17, 2019 1:37 am

I really don't know how to thank you for this amazing reply! It is beyond belief! You have written an article on the subject! This is not the first time! I am truly grateful!

Many many thanks,
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Post by Phil White » Mon Jun 17, 2019 10:28 am

Thanks. It was fun.

I did some extensive corpus analysis yesterday and the results bear out what I suggested above. They also suggest that the issue with "come" is a little more complex. I shall organize the findings and post them in the next few days.

The advantage of corpus analysis is that it gives real sentences from real writers and speakers instead of examples that I think up to prove a point!
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Post by Phil White » Mon Jun 17, 2019 9:41 pm

I spent quite a time doing some searches through the British National Corpus to try to substantiate my hypotheses. The BNC is a corpus of more than 100 million words of written and spoken text from a vast variety of sources, including newspapers, academic journals, fiction, screenplays and transcripts of spoken English.

The examples in this post are from:
The British National Corpus, version 3 (BNC XML Edition). 2007. Distributed by Bodleian Libraries, University of Oxford, on behalf of the BNC Consortium. URL: http://www.natcorp.ox.ac.uk/

I performed a search over the entire corpus for the following archetypal construction:
punctuation - preposition - article - noun - past tense verb - article - noun

The punctuation constraint at the front considerably reduced the number of hits unrelated to the construction we are looking at. Since I was only looking at this one archetypal form, the number of hits does not allow any conclusions as to the frequency of the construction per se. The search would not find any cases with a present tense or a progressive verb, nor cases where the nouns are qualified by adjectives, for instance. Thus, the following examples would not have been found:
  • With great power comes great responsibility.
  • Atop the hill stood a huge fortress.
That said, I think that the archetypal form allows reliable conclusions to be drawn.

Before discussing the various issues, it is worth noting that, despite the fact that the BNC contains texts of many different genres, almost all the examples of this construction appear to be from works of fiction. The reason is simple. It is a narrative device to delay the subject of a sentence until the background has been painted. It is of less use in journalistic or academic texts.

The search yielded a total of 318 matches across the entire corpus. Some of these were related to entirely different constructions, and very many reflected the use of "be" that I discussed above ("Above the cornice was an attic ..."). Eliminating these, I was left with 61 matches for the construction we are looking at. Of these, 45 fully comply with the principles I laid out above. 13 relate to a use of "come" that I had missed, and 3 need a little further explanation.

I shall look at the special use of "come" and a couple of oddities with "come" and deal with the three more difficult examples and then simply list the remaining 45 examples as a representative sample of how the construction is used in real life.

It appears that there is a specific idiom that I missed in my comments above, namely "with x came y". The idiom is not always inverted ("the car came with the job"), but inversion is very common as a narrative device. The meaning of the idiom is that one thing is a consequence or attendant aspect of another (the car is part of the pay package for the job). This is also true in the case of one of the examples I gave above: "With Autumn come the winds".

This idiom is a further special case in addition to the use of "come" with some time expressions and applies in the following examples:
  1. With the light came the music.
  2. With the message came a warning.
  3. With the estates came the service of the existing duchy officials ...
  4. With the wars came a rise in the price of corn.
  5. With the reorganisation came a readjustment of the Land Survey regional boundaries.
  6. With the move came the carpet tile printing machines and the tile store.
There were also some strange uses with "come", but they can all be explained relatively easily:
  • Over a loudspeaker came a voice speaking Latvian ...
    This is a figurative use of come, but relies on the image of the voice actually emanating from the loudspeaker. It still meets the three principles I suggested above.
  • From the oak came the timber with which British ships were built.
    Again, this use of "come" to mean that something is the source of something else is a figurative extension of the motion suggested by "come". It thus also meets the three principles.
  • Along the way came the rescue of the magazine, History Today ...
    This one is actually an example of the exception I discussed above, if a little disguised. "Along the way" is in fact an expression of time, meaning something like "during this process". It is therefore an example of the exception where "come" is used with adverbials of time.
  • Throughout the week came a slew of endorsements ...
    And this one is a more straightforward example of the same exception.
  • Behind the leaf-fall came a gust of budding, the black branches sprouting new growth in seconds ...
    Again, in this example "behind the leaf-fall" is in fact an expression of time (after the leaves had fallen), so we are again dealing with the same exception.
This leaves us with the three examples that require some explanation:
  • On the riverside rose the shapes of a possible future ...
    This one is a strange mix of figurative and literal usage. The context is the Great Exhibition of 1851 in London, and the sentence is describing the skyline after the new buildings had been erected. In fact, "rose" does not entail movement here. It is closer in meaning to something like "towered", so the combination with a location, such as "on the riverside" is just fine.
    In fact, this one helped me to clarify the problem I had with azz's original sentence "in the distance moved a cloud of dust". I would be happy with "across the far horizon moved a cloud of dust" (motion in the adverbial and the verb) and with "in the distance rose a cloud of dust (location in both cases). It is the mixture of the verb implying motion and the adverbial implying location that I am unhappy with.
  • Through the silence rang a bell as if signalling the end of a round in a boxing match.
    Again, we are dealing with figurative uses here. "Ring" does not imply motion, but the metaphor is that of a sound penetrating the silence, so this one actually satisfies all of our principles.
  • With the chair went a canonry at the cathedral.
    This one is a real curve ball! This is a complementary idiom to "with x comes y". Strangely, it seems to mean the same thing, although its use is more restricted:

    The car came with the job.
    The job came with a car. (Note the change of article!)
    The car went with the job.
    *The job went with a car.

    "a" goes with "b" only if "a" is ancillary to "b". This is not true with "come with". Cue another post!
    Either way, this is an additional usage related to the second "come with" exception described above in this post.
So the corpus analysis has given us an additional exception: The idiom "with x comes y" in the sense of y being an attendant aspect of x. Inversion is also possible with the complementary idiom "with x goes y". Otherwise, all the examples conform to the principles outlined in my previous post, which is gratifying.

To conclude, here are the remaining examples that conform to the principles I laid out in my previous post. I list them merely for information and without further comment:

Behind the table sat the President of the World. Beside the President sat Susan.
... on the other [side] stood a plaster saint arrayed in a brown habit.
Beyond the door lay the cargo compartment, bare, bleak, functional and obviously designed for one purpose.
Down the stairs came the cat, sullen-eyed.
Beyond the cottages stood the public-house, a ramshackle two-storied building, its whitewashed walls now a dirty grey.
Across the table sat a group of three boisterous lads ...
Through the wall came the murmur of someone else's radio.
In the centre stood a jam jar with flowers in it ...
On the left lay a corpse.
From the gates emerged the spawn of chaos: daemons, sorcerers, the lost and the damned.
Through the wall came the thump of rock music ...
Through the rain came the sound of the fair ...
... in the centre nestled the jewel of her sexuality.
On the counter lay a writing-pad and a felt-tipped pen.
To the south lay the workers' quarters; long, low huts that seemed embedded in the earth.
Beyond the city rose a line of gentle hills, looking blue-grey in the distance.
To the right lay a couple of buff-coloured laboratory files with biology registrations ...
From the school came the sound of children's voices singing a hymn, accompanied by a piano ...
From the back-yard came the sound of bottles rattling ...
In the chair crouched the figure of Vanessa Dersingham, stitching a tapestry.
In the hall lay a body.
From the east came the roar of ten thousand blast furnaces.
In the centre stood a sarcophagus.
At the front walked the funeral director, tophatted and cane in his hand ...
At the kerb-side stood an ambulance and a police car.
Across the table sat the Association for Relations Across the Taiwan Straits ...
Beyond the rubble stood a chest of treasure with more healing potions and firepower beneath its lid.
To the shrine came a trickle of pilgrims ...
... some 3.2 km (2 miles) down the river lay the vexillation fortress at Longthorpe ...
Beyond the Tamar lay a land where things were ordered differently ...
At the apex stood a chariot with a four-horse team ...
To the south lay a country whose king was trying to establish an English Catholic church ...
Over the ether came the strain, that lilting refrain ...
To the east lay the entrances to the warehouse for road vehicles and the entrance yard ...
Behind the indecision lay a youth torn in one direction by the family business ...
Above the altar rose the back wall ...
... through the field ran a stream which fed ponds ...
Up the track came an engine pushing a blazing box-car.
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Re: inversion

Post by azz » Wed Jun 19, 2019 8:17 pm

Thank you so much,

I am overwhelmed by your kindness and your meticulousness and...

This should be transformed into a scholarly article.

Many many thanks
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