I do admire my close friend

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I do admire my close friend

Post by STEVENSAKURA » Fri Jan 15, 2010 6:53 am

- I do admire my close friend about many things. Although there are lots of unemployed people these days, he still do not accept to have a job with low pay and not compatible with his ability.

- Do these sound very good? :)

Thanks so much!

StevenSakura
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Re: I do admire my close friend

Post by Wizard of Oz » Fri Jan 15, 2010 9:22 am

.. Steve in a word .. NO!! .. let's break it down >>

I do admire my close friend about many things. I would write >> I admire my close friend for many reasons.

Although there are lots of unemployed people these days, he still do not accept to have a job with low pay and not compatible with his ability. Mate this one really has me guessing but what I think you are trying to say is that your friend will not accept a job for which he thinks he is overqualified and which pays low wages. Am I correct? .. if so then I would write something like >> Even though he is unemployed he continues to look for a job to match his qualifications. He is not willing to accept a low paid job.

.. how does that sound ??

WoZ who works permanent part-time
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Re: I do admire my close friend

Post by russcable » Fri Jan 15, 2010 3:34 pm

Wizard of Oz wrote:Steve, in a word: NO!! Let's break it down:

I do admire my close friend about many things. I would write >> I admire my close friend for many reasons.

Although there are lots of unemployed people these days, he still do not accept to have a job with low pay and not compatible with his ability. Mate, this one really has me guessing, but what I think you are trying to say is that your friend will not accept a job for which he thinks he is overqualified and which pays low wages. Am I correct? If so, then I would write something like: Even though he is unemployed he continues to look for a job to match his qualifications. He is not willing to accept a low paid job.

How does that sound?

WoZ who works permanent part-time
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