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Post Just text me
Posted on: Sun Feb 07, 2010 6:17 pm

- When you get home safely, just text me. Then I can feel secure to go to sleep.
- When you arrive home safely / make it home ok, just send me a text message. Then I can be secure to go to bed.

- Do these 2 sentences sound natural? :)

Thanks a million!

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Post Re: Just text me
Posted on: Sun Feb 07, 2010 7:59 pm

Both are formal in register and somewhat stilted both in grammar and word choice (arrive, secure) which seems unsuited for the situation.
"just" doesn't fit for me. Is the person saying "Don't call me, just text me."? Or did you mean something like "quickly" by it like "As soon as you get home, text me."

When you get home, text me so I'll know you're okay.

Text me when you get home so I can fall asleep.


 
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Post Re: Just text me
Posted on: Tue Feb 09, 2010 4:58 am

.. Steve you could try >>

When you arrive at your place of domicile would you be so good as to send me a text message informing me of the precise time of your safe arrival. Only then shall I be able to go to sleep secure in the knowledge that no danger has befallen you.

WoZ awaiting the text

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Post Re: Just text me
Posted on: Wed Feb 10, 2010 1:04 am

WOZ,

That is a very large tongue in your check!

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Post Re: Just text me
Posted on: Wed Feb 10, 2010 10:51 am

Yes, we should probably all strive to keep our tongues in check.

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Post Re: Just text me
Posted on: Fri Feb 19, 2010 1:47 am

But we can't all be gland masters.


 
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Post Re: Just text me
Posted on: Fri Feb 19, 2010 2:05 am

Though some of us have glandiose ideas.

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