Can you help me rewrite this infomation. They are telling me what they want for the Scope of this position. I have responded with this experince but I feel it could be revised. Can you help me?
Scope of this Position
Position will be responsible for supervising/managing/overseeing the following departments: Coincierge and Bell Staff. Etc.
This is my experience in property management/hospitality/sales.
Responsible for supervising/managing/overseeing an (eight) 8 person staff covering front office and administrative assistant, maintenance supervisor, janitor, and (4-person) security.
Responsible for supervising/scheduling/managing thirteen 13 dining servers, four (4) Housekeepers.
Responsible for supervising managing/overseeing a (six) 6 person staff covering Front Office and administrative assistant, maintenance, porter, two overnight security.
Acquired over ten (10) year(s) of supervisory experience
Positions reported to the Director of Personnel/Executive Administrator/Supervisor
Property sizes varied between 100 to 250 units plus clubhouse and grounds.
Positions were required to work a varied schedule that included some evenings, nights, …...weekends.
Thank You, If this is not clear I will explain further.